I really enjoyed this! I usually don't like partial voice acting (I prefer full or none at all) but you guys did a really good job with this one, so I left it on. The moment where the games gets serious with Sadiya really hooked me fast, I was super invested at that point. I felt like the puzzle right after wasn't very well explained in the game, and it took me so long to complete that it took me out of the narrative a bit. Still, I thought the idea behind it was good, and the ending got me right in the feels. I chose Sadiya. <3 I think it would have been even more effective if I literally couldn't reload and make another choice after that, but at the same time, I was glad I could see everyone else's ending too. Overall, really good job on this. Will be looking out for more stuff from you in the future. (:
WHOOPS i'm back because as a teacher-in-training Lumina's ending made me really emo and I wrote crappy poetry about it, it's not like. good but hey something that you made inspired someone else to make art about it so like legitimately good job, I haven't written a poem in like a good month at least and it's not an easy thing to unlock.
Wow! Thank you very much! It really means so much and that poetry is super good, the last line gave me chills. Super happy I was able to inspire you. As for the other things, I was also not really happy with the reloading thing and the confusing puzzle. This was my first visual novel like this and I wanted to make it impactful.
Since I made this in a couple months, if I had more time, I would be sure to make the story much longer, as well as making the endings harder to get to. Perhaps one day I'll come back to this project! I also had some other CGs planned (two for when you meet Sadiya and Valari in phase one, ala Amora and Lumina, and 2 more for Lumina and Valari's endings.) Some of the CGs were rushed since I literally had a few hours to complete them so I'd want to polish them.
Anyway sorry for the long response but truly, thank you!
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i can't find the code, and this is hurting my small monke brain to find it :(
why is this even a thing? :(
Scroll up a bit. The solution is literally written on this page for those who need it
Will there be a mac version?
I really enjoyed this! I usually don't like partial voice acting (I prefer full or none at all) but you guys did a really good job with this one, so I left it on. The moment where the games gets serious with Sadiya really hooked me fast, I was super invested at that point. I felt like the puzzle right after wasn't very well explained in the game, and it took me so long to complete that it took me out of the narrative a bit. Still, I thought the idea behind it was good, and the ending got me right in the feels. I chose Sadiya. <3 I think it would have been even more effective if I literally couldn't reload and make another choice after that, but at the same time, I was glad I could see everyone else's ending too. Overall, really good job on this. Will be looking out for more stuff from you in the future. (:
WHOOPS i'm back because as a teacher-in-training Lumina's ending made me really emo and I wrote crappy poetry about it, it's not like. good but hey something that you made inspired someone else to make art about it so like legitimately good job, I haven't written a poem in like a good month at least and it's not an easy thing to unlock.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tCLPz_BPaoLN61fsTzMVXiCwlO-5SmBYNZqiJiL8k8c/...
Wow! Thank you very much! It really means so much and that poetry is super good, the last line gave me chills. Super happy I was able to inspire you. As for the other things, I was also not really happy with the reloading thing and the confusing puzzle. This was my first visual novel like this and I wanted to make it impactful.
Since I made this in a couple months, if I had more time, I would be sure to make the story much longer, as well as making the endings harder to get to. Perhaps one day I'll come back to this project! I also had some other CGs planned (two for when you meet Sadiya and Valari in phase one, ala Amora and Lumina, and 2 more for Lumina and Valari's endings.) Some of the CGs were rushed since I literally had a few hours to complete them so I'd want to polish them.
Anyway sorry for the long response but truly, thank you!
Fantastic little Visual Novel, I thoroughly enjoyed the read! :)
Thank you!
This looks like it'll be very interesting! When this comes out, I'll be sure to download and play it.
Awesome! Thank you~